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L Amoureuse v881

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L'Amoureuse v881 - www.lv888.fr - Take pleasure is the only rule !

Carnet à Croquis A4 N8 Dessin N°22 sur 120
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

HOI!

This is a pretty good piece of art!

firstly, lets start with technique, the shading and lighting is pretty good. shadows are in the correct place. although, with the line art, it could be a bit neater. I know you are looking for the sketchy feel, but there is always room for improvement!

anatomy, is pretty good. I suggest working on the head a bit, to me it kinda looks like its melting into the chair? the hand, could use a bit of tweaking. the left leg need to be revised a lot. because the lower ankle part is far too bulging. otherwise, it is fantastic!

I hope you found my critique helpful!

samanthakittykat :3